Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Blizs Quick write


It was nighttime when the plane's dropped the bomb's on the town as they flow over alarms started to go off when the planes flew over the house ginet flowed above black.

Clouds formed over the destroyed buildings lights started to flash, on and off for a long, time then it stopped everything was suddenly  quiet For a long time I pecked out off the bunker where we were.

Hiding no planes but flames and people running round in flames screaming,then I saw a man who looked a lot like hitler it was hitler I shout.

2 comments:

  1. Your writing draws me into being in the bunker peering out with you Samuel. It certainly would have been a frightening experience. Keep up the great focus on your writing and I look forward to reading more.

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    1. HI Samuel,
      I really like your piece of writing. I really like your writing about the story. Keep up the good work

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